Monday, May 28, 2007

I wonder why I wonder

The world is so entrancing,
So captivating in its way.
That I begun burning, [with jealousy!]
Dark clouds darkening my day.

Even the clouds they are so lovely,
I feel like stealing them.
To wear their wonderful beauty,
emphasizing their silver hem.

Oh! Why is it only me,
Who is so deeply lost in wonder?
They live and let live with glee,
On them I have no time to squander.

And so,
I turned my head around,
And in my eye, time stared.
My mind floated off the ground,
To ask them, then I dared.

Why, my friend are you so queer?
A boon, a bane everything.
You, in my heart invoke great fear;
Please stop this fanciful playing.

Time looked at me,And ticked away;
ticked away to glory.
And as it did this magical act,
Upon my grave I lay.

I saw everything I wanted to see,
I realized and so, understood.
Ahead was He, the mighty God.
And there he calmly stood.

10 comments:

hseeniv said...

Neat n nice!! Gr8 wrk!! :)

Sirf, plz explain the first stanza. I'd be grateful to u!! ;)

And yeah, I prefer the reply here!! :P

Congrats on ur first awesome post!! Keep the good wrk gng!! :)

hseeniv said...

Oye, reply toh karo!!

hseeniv said...

Heeeeelllllloooooooooooo!!

U have been tagged:

http://hseeniv.blogspot.com/2007/06/8rf-game.html

U gotta make a post wid the same instructions on my post.

Vishesh said...

I like nature. I find it extremely beautiful and sometimes I wish to be in their tranquil, patient and beautiful bodies. I feel that I must be the only person indulging in such futile thoughts and then I see time...

Sakshi said...

Oh wow. Nice one Vishesh. Much better than ur dips diary thing. :)

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Unknown said...

Good one Vishesh. Congrats. But even I wonder where you get ideas like these from.

Keep it up!

Nayan

Sakshi said...

Seriously. Nerd God. Now I have a proof. You really are as nerdy as...(to be continued)

hseeniv said...

Hey wen will u get on with some serious work on this blog??

It's getting as stale as yesterday's breakfast!! :P

Sakshi said...

now it's as stale as breakfast served 10 days ago. :P
guess who's vela [again]